New song I wrote, tell me what you think.
Take Back Yesterday
(verse 1)
the indescribable feeling of regret clings to my soul
right now I feel that I dont deserve you anymore
never in my life have I felt like this before
I’m crying from the words I said, leave me on the floor
(chours )
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
(verse 2)
the evolution of the revolution of my mind, is blind
the empty scilence of my soul, lets me know, I’m searching but I wont find
your blameless and I am nameless to you right now
I cant believe what I made this into, bury me in the ground
(chours)
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
(bridge)
jeapordizing the one thing that I love
has insanity taken over everything I’m made of?
I cannot live with myself, with the mistakes that I made
without you my very being would fade…
(chours)
I want to exisit no longer
I thought I could’ve been stronger
I want to take back yesterday
and throw it far away…
Anonymous
snazzy very snazzy song might be a hit..
tomorrows_goodbye
very well done. ohh no man.. the moffats are the baking music. try it sometime.
beautifully_faded
Hmmm, maybe I’ll give it a go next time I’m making KD!
lyrical_symphony
nice man. has a very dashboard feel to it. i like it.
lyrical_symphony
come to think of it… verse two and some of the chorus, has the same type of rhyme scheme as “vindicated” heh heh.
ashes_fishes12
Aww yay will be be singing this one?? with justin in my basement! i promise i wont cough~
Anonymous
thatss really good brandon!
funkypunkyperson
oh I so deleted that comment!!! you must buy it from me!!!actually, you don’t have to, I will just return it and get my $21.71 back! I was trying to give you a deal…..But it’s TOO LATE!!!
paintingsilence
hey are you going to come to our hosue concert? i know your always cool but you would be even cooler if you came.
MoonlitRainStorm
Thats really good. Two thumbs up.
proud_canadian_eh
very “deep” lol very good brandon! *clap* you could be so famous lol ttyl! xoxoAshyxoxo
my_famouse_aunt
Well, it is a good song, very well thought out, but it sounds kinda suicidal. Are you feeling ok brando buddy?
Anonymous
aww Brandon.. 🙂 i love youu
beyondtheglass
House concert on Sat….10 dollars….for Canadian music week…we need to raise money or we cannot go…..everyone come….free food that we baked ourselves….moffats are great baking music….yep yep they are
tomorrows_goodbye
i liiike spider man.
beautifully_faded
I like spiderman to, isnt that interesting? Cant make the concert, I’ll be in kamloops playing basketball all weekend. I would’ve loved to go though. Thanks for the commentos guys. Hannah, I love you to. :b