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February 23, 2005

I wrote this poem in my spare time, tell me what you think.


a rose to begin


a rose to end


from being a lover


to being a friend


i look back now with but one regret


that i will never be able to forget


everything that i held close


all the things I loved the most


everything has been erased


the pages of my heart are blank


do not think that first love dies


it will live on throughout our lives


one last time i search your eyes


but all thats left are thoughtless lies


forget not my words to you


despite the lies my words are true.


/ Edit:  /

I made a “quiz your friends” thing. If you guys wanna check it out click the link below or paste it in your browser. http://www.quizyourfriends.com/yourquiz.php?quizname=050225114536-270078

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  1. Reply

    ashes_fishes12

    February 23, 2005

    I love it!! it relates a lot to what we have been talking about! awesome bro!

  2. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 23, 2005

    aw thats so good, i love it… yesssssss im the first person to write a comment, have a great day

  3. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 23, 2005

    it brought
    actual hard core.
    tears to my eyes.

  4. Reply

    dancing_inthe_streets

    February 23, 2005

    now youuu.are a poet hah.

  5. Reply

    up_hill_both_ways

    February 23, 2005

    do u wanna write poetry for me, b/c i have to hand some in tomorrow for english and i suck at poetry. haha thanx….ur pic is so cool too…who took it

  6. Reply

    beyondtheglass

    February 23, 2005

    hmmmmmmm. first love? yesssss.

  7. Reply

    lyrical_symphony

    February 23, 2005

    i like everything except for the “has now become something gross” rhyme.  i know you had difficulty finding a good word that rhymed with close… but be creative.  personally, thats the only thing i could find wrong.  which means its good.  peace.

  8. Reply

    my_famouse_aunt

    February 23, 2005

    you’r a poet and I didn’t noet.

    well, actually I did. cause you right songs like mad! Yeah.

    That’s pretty cool man. Reminds me of a story I once heard.

  9. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 24, 2005

    go go go go go go…

    Come What May…haha you watched the whole movie…i cant believe you wanted to go to bed it made me sad so i made you watch the whole thing sucker…

    yeah man that was good…i see it all…its all going to move on just swell…cause first love doesnt mean it is always the perfect love…more love will come…

    “The greatest you’ll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return”

    “Love is like oxygen”

    …first love doesnt always mean your true love…that my friend will come to you when you are really ready…haha okay well im done going on with all this love stuff yikes…

  10. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 24, 2005

    oops i meant “The greatest THING…

  11. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 24, 2005

    aww brandon that is such a good poem ya u r way better poem writter than me lol wow thats so awsome!!!!! <333

  12. Reply

    seanfitzpat

    February 24, 2005

    BA BA BARBARIAN BA BARBARIAN BA BA BARBARIN DAVE THE BARBARIAN

  13. Reply

    extremely_confused

    February 24, 2005

    aww that’s an awesome poem! I hope it all starts working out for you, i know life is tough, situations are hard. but I hope for you that it’ gets easier real soon!

  14. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 24, 2005

    you will lose all your hair.
    and no more.
    hair will you have.
    dont go.
    you will become.
     butch.

  15. Reply

    MissAmie

    February 24, 2005

    that was hot i wish all boys wrote good poetry

  16. Reply

    proud_canadian_eh

    February 24, 2005

    WOAH! you shoudl be a poet! lol that was crazy amazing! that poem is sooo good! ya I wish all guys wrote poetry….that would be aowsme xoxo–Ash

  17. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 24, 2005

    that was a good peom…i’ve written better hahaha. just joshing you.

  18. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    aww brandon i like it ya it kinda relates to what all of us at some point will go throughjust sometimes its hard to say in normal words so poetry works… ya ihave no idea if that mase sence?? anyways i thought it did… haha

    Richelle

  19. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    you will have to cut your hair and you will be a boy who starts to growl.           if you go there. you will be different. go if you please. 60 days wow.

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRANDON!!! 17!!!

     OH YEAH AWESOMENESS!!!

    YUP YUP YUP!!!

    COME OVER HERE AND SIT ON MY KNEE!!!

    HAVE A GOOD WEEKEND…I’LL MISS YOU!!! HAHA!!!

    OKAY BYE…AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN!!! 

  20. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    SATURDAY IS YOUR BIG BIRTHDAY!!! HAHA AND YOU CANT GET MAD AT ME AND BEAT ME UP FOR PUTTING IT ON YOUR XANGA CAUSE YOU WONT SEE ME BEFORE THEN!!! SUCKER!!!

  21. Reply

    tomorrows_goodbye

    February 25, 2005

    i bombed that quiz. happy birthday:)

  22. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    bombed it ariel? no way I bombed it 🙂 happyy birthhhdayyyy

  23. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    oh and i love the poem by the way, made me cry..haha 🙂

  24. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    argh i did horrible on your quiz…w/e haha i still know you better then that…some of the questions confused me…

  25. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    yes and its the cd release tonight so haha o well theres always another time and they still will be selling them at all their cocnerts so ya lol have a good one !!!

    much love <333 xoxo

  26. Reply

    ashes_fishes12

    February 25, 2005

    you will brotha!!! happy birthday man!!! 17!! w00t w00t love you`

  27. Reply

    ashes_fishes12

    February 25, 2005

    100% w00t w00t!!! i know you the best!!! even better then HANNAH

  28. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    happy birthday.
    dear.
    i shall hope it is.
    a grand time.
    have fun in richmond gorichmond.
    oh frick.
    have good time.

  29. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    yep 🙂 ha

  30. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 25, 2005

    YOU WISH ASHLEY jsut cause i got one stupid question wrong..give me a break! aha jk..kinda..

  31. Reply

    seanfitzpat

    February 26, 2005

    Hillary duff?h my JOJO BUD anyways i think i got 50 so thats pretty good lol

    ok dont make fun of me

  32. Reply

    seanfitzpat

    February 26, 2005

    Every time you see me
    The Sean’s just so hype
    I’m dope on the floor and I’m magic on the mic
    Now why would I ever stop doing this?
    With others making records that just don’t hit
    I’ve toured around the world, from London to the Bay
    It’s “Seanner, go Seanner, MC Seanner, yo Seanner”
    And the rest can go and play
    CANT TOUCH THIS

  33. Reply

    dancing_inthe_streets

    February 26, 2005

    it is a good song.iii agree

    hey.happy birthday 🙂

  34. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 26, 2005

    HAPPY BIRHTDAY

    it is saturday.

    you are 17.

    HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYY

  35. Reply

    hey_marz

    February 26, 2005

    Dude, that was great! Keep up the great work!

    Wow, youve always been amazing when it comes to poems.

    Happy birthday man

    Cya soon!

    Jose

  36. Reply

    hey_marz

    February 26, 2005

    oops,ahaah sorry im using my sister xanga.ahahaha

  37. Reply

    proud_canadian_eh

    February 26, 2005

    thats a HOT pic haha HAPPY BIRTHDAY! you are *17 thast crazy…only one more year and your ya 18 k lol I couldnt think of anything interesting so I said 18 but anyways have a good one! xoxo–Ash

  38. Reply

    lyrical_symphony

    February 26, 2005

    happy birthday.

  39. Reply

    Anonymous

    February 26, 2005

    p.s hah i never knew u had a cell phone lol well most ppl do im like the only one without o ne haha yes so its your birthday day today HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

  40. Reply

    tomorrows_goodbye

    February 26, 2005

    yo brotha, deffinetly watch the oscars man. it’ll be niiicee. men in suites. sweet

  41. Reply

    lyrical_symphony

    February 26, 2005

    ah HA! you changed the part of the poem that i said i didn’t like…

    and now its flawless.  kudos.

  42. Reply

    leopolds_understudy

    February 26, 2005

    aww the poem is wonderfuly great

     i got 60% on the quize thingy haha just to let you know

  43. Reply

    funkypunkyperson

    February 26, 2005

    I know, I love that about late presents. even about presents in general. It’s like, you get to spend the day with a whackload of your buddies and eat cake, and you still get gifts! haha.

    I really like your poem also. Deep and amazing as always.

  44. Reply

    extremely_confused

    February 26, 2005

    Ya! I got 100, although some of them I was going to guess other ones. Like I definitely would think running around in your blue spandex suit would be highlight for sure and keys to what? hahah ok ya. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! hahah  I hope you have an awesome year! Ok ya ttyl.

  45. Reply

    lafille17

    February 27, 2005

    psst! what’s your favorite musical??

    aww dang wrong again.

  46. Reply

    LiL_CryS

    February 27, 2005

    hey, nice poem.. i absolutely love it.. good job!..

  47. Reply

    funkypunkyperson

    February 27, 2005

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Were you suprised at your partay???

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