I wrote this poem in my spare time, tell me what you think.
a rose to begin
a rose to end
from being a lover
to being a friend
i look back now with but one regret
that i will never be able to forget
everything that i held close
all the things I loved the most
everything has been erased
the pages of my heart are blank
do not think that first love dies
it will live on throughout our lives
one last time i search your eyes
but all thats left are thoughtless lies
forget not my words to you
despite the lies my words are true.
/ Edit: /
I made a “quiz your friends” thing. If you guys wanna check it out click the link below or paste it in your browser. http://www.quizyourfriends.com/yourquiz.php?quizname=050225114536-270078
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ashes_fishes12
I love it!! it relates a lot to what we have been talking about! awesome bro!
Anonymous
aw thats so good, i love it… yesssssss im the first person to write a comment, have a great day
Anonymous
it brought
actual hard core.
tears to my eyes.
dancing_inthe_streets
now youuu.are a poet hah.
up_hill_both_ways
do u wanna write poetry for me, b/c i have to hand some in tomorrow for english and i suck at poetry. haha thanx….ur pic is so cool too…who took it
beyondtheglass
hmmmmmmm. first love? yesssss.
lyrical_symphony
i like everything except for the “has now become something gross” rhyme. i know you had difficulty finding a good word that rhymed with close… but be creative. personally, thats the only thing i could find wrong. which means its good. peace.
my_famouse_aunt
you’r a poet and I didn’t noet.
well, actually I did. cause you right songs like mad! Yeah.
That’s pretty cool man. Reminds me of a story I once heard.
Anonymous
go go go go go go…
Come What May…haha you watched the whole movie…i cant believe you wanted to go to bed it made me sad so i made you watch the whole thing sucker…
yeah man that was good…i see it all…its all going to move on just swell…cause first love doesnt mean it is always the perfect love…more love will come…
“The greatest you’ll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return”
“Love is like oxygen”
…first love doesnt always mean your true love…that my friend will come to you when you are really ready…haha okay well im done going on with all this love stuff yikes…
Anonymous
oops i meant “The greatest THING…
Anonymous
aww brandon that is such a good poem ya u r way better poem writter than me lol wow thats so awsome!!!!! <333
seanfitzpat
BA BA BARBARIAN BA BARBARIAN BA BA BARBARIN DAVE THE BARBARIAN
extremely_confused
aww that’s an awesome poem! I hope it all starts working out for you, i know life is tough, situations are hard. but I hope for you that it’ gets easier real soon!
Anonymous
you will lose all your hair.
and no more.
hair will you have.
dont go.
you will become.
butch.
MissAmie
that was hot i wish all boys wrote good poetry
proud_canadian_eh
WOAH! you shoudl be a poet! lol that was crazy amazing! that poem is sooo good! ya I wish all guys wrote poetry….that would be aowsme xoxo–Ash
Anonymous
that was a good peom…i’ve written better hahaha. just joshing you.
Anonymous
aww brandon i like it ya it kinda relates to what all of us at some point will go throughjust sometimes its hard to say in normal words so poetry works… ya ihave no idea if that mase sence?? anyways i thought it did… haha
Richelle
Anonymous
you will have to cut your hair and you will be a boy who starts to growl. if you go there. you will be different. go if you please. 60 days wow.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRANDON!!! 17!!!
OH YEAH AWESOMENESS!!!
YUP YUP YUP!!!
COME OVER HERE AND SIT ON MY KNEE!!!
HAVE A GOOD WEEKEND…I’LL MISS YOU!!! HAHA!!!
OKAY BYE…AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN!!!
Anonymous
SATURDAY IS YOUR BIG BIRTHDAY!!! HAHA AND YOU CANT GET MAD AT ME AND BEAT ME UP FOR PUTTING IT ON YOUR XANGA CAUSE YOU WONT SEE ME BEFORE THEN!!! SUCKER!!!
tomorrows_goodbye
i bombed that quiz. happy birthday:)
Anonymous
bombed it ariel? no way I bombed it 🙂 happyy birthhhdayyyy
Anonymous
oh and i love the poem by the way, made me cry..haha 🙂
Anonymous
argh i did horrible on your quiz…w/e haha i still know you better then that…some of the questions confused me…
Anonymous
yes and its the cd release tonight so haha o well theres always another time and they still will be selling them at all their cocnerts so ya lol have a good one !!!
much love <333 xoxo
ashes_fishes12
you will brotha!!! happy birthday man!!! 17!! w00t w00t love you`
ashes_fishes12
100% w00t w00t!!! i know you the best!!! even better then HANNAH
Anonymous
happy birthday.
dear.
i shall hope it is.
a grand time.
have fun in richmond gorichmond.
oh frick.
have good time.
Anonymous
yep 🙂 ha
Anonymous
YOU WISH ASHLEY jsut cause i got one stupid question wrong..give me a break! aha jk..kinda..
seanfitzpat
Hillary duff?h my JOJO BUD anyways i think i got 50 so thats pretty good lol
ok dont make fun of me
seanfitzpat
Every time you see me
The Sean’s just so hype
I’m dope on the floor and I’m magic on the mic
Now why would I ever stop doing this?
With others making records that just don’t hit
I’ve toured around the world, from London to the Bay
It’s “Seanner, go Seanner, MC Seanner, yo Seanner”
And the rest can go and play
CANT TOUCH THIS
dancing_inthe_streets
it is a good song.iii agree
hey.happy birthday 🙂
Anonymous
HAPPY BIRHTDAY
it is saturday.
you are 17.
HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYY
hey_marz
Dude, that was great! Keep up the great work!
Wow, youve always been amazing when it comes to poems.
Happy birthday man
Cya soon!
Jose
hey_marz
oops,ahaah sorry im using my sister xanga.ahahaha
proud_canadian_eh
thats a HOT pic haha HAPPY BIRTHDAY! you are *17 thast crazy…only one more year and your ya 18 k lol I couldnt think of anything interesting so I said 18 but anyways have a good one! xoxo–Ash
lyrical_symphony
happy birthday.
Anonymous
p.s hah i never knew u had a cell phone lol well most ppl do im like the only one without o ne haha yes so its your birthday day today HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
tomorrows_goodbye
yo brotha, deffinetly watch the oscars man. it’ll be niiicee. men in suites. sweet
lyrical_symphony
ah HA! you changed the part of the poem that i said i didn’t like…
and now its flawless. kudos.
leopolds_understudy
aww the poem is wonderfuly great
i got 60% on the quize thingy haha just to let you know
funkypunkyperson
I know, I love that about late presents. even about presents in general. It’s like, you get to spend the day with a whackload of your buddies and eat cake, and you still get gifts! haha.
I really like your poem also. Deep and amazing as always.
extremely_confused
Ya! I got 100, although some of them I was going to guess other ones. Like I definitely would think running around in your blue spandex suit would be highlight for sure and keys to what? hahah ok ya. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! hahah I hope you have an awesome year! Ok ya ttyl.
lafille17
psst! what’s your favorite musical??
aww dang wrong again.
LiL_CryS
hey, nice poem.. i absolutely love it.. good job!..
funkypunkyperson
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Were you suprised at your partay???